Novel Writing: NaNo, No NaNo

I clearly had no ideaParticipant-2014-Web-Banner what I was doing when I signed up to NaNoWriMo this year. For those of you that don’t know NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month and runs from 1-30 November. The goal is to write a 50,000-word novel in one month.

In 2010 when I first participated, I wrote everyday. I remember it being really stressful but I had a novel on my head and I was stubborn. I got to 50,000 words by 28 Nov and that was that – I won!

This year I’m struggling. It’s my second attempt. I put it off each year since 2010 and now I’ve jumped in. The problem is I’m meant to be at 18,000+ words by today and I’m only at 8,000+. At this rate, I won’t reach 50,000 words till the first week of Jan 2015! It’s a mess – and totally unlike me. I don’t write everyday, which is a major cause of the lack of progress. When I do write, I feel like I’m writing pages and pages but when I look at the word count, it says I’ve done only 123 words. What??!

Anyway, I was hoping for some help. I have put to paragraphs here in the hopes that you will suggest how the story could go for a paragraph or two.

Excerpt  1:

“Why do you tolerate it, Mama? Why?” Gina felt her heart pounding and her hands shaking. She continued before her mother had a chance to respond, “He treats you so badly, Mama! I don’t understand…” Tears ran down Gina’s face. She had had enough. This was why she left home. “Gi, you will understand with time. Where we come from, women don’t just leave their husbands…” Her mother’s voice was gentle. “We women stay and fight.” She concluded. That was the day Gina swore never to marry anybody. She would rather die than live a life sentence.

Excerpt 2:

Bea and Beth sit in silence for a little while before Beth says, “if it makes you feel any better, I haven’t had sex in months!” Bea smiles and then starts to laugh. “Yeah it does make me feel better…” Bea reached for Beth’s shoulder squeezes it and says, “Thanks for being there for me. I have no one to talk to and with Gavin out of town…,” Bea cleared her throat, “I got a little overwhelmed with everything.”

“Any time, Bea…you know I’m here any time,” Beth says as an unpleasant memory flashes through her mind. She reaches for her cup and finally sips her lukewarm latte. Everything is almost OK in the world.

Can anyone help? What could happen next in either of the paragraphs? There may be prizes 😉

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Does this post count?

You know what’s really strange? When I was drowning in work, studies, housework and all the other activities I “volunteered” for, I had more blogging time. But now that studies are finished and there’s significantly more time on my hands, I haven’t written a real post in a while. How bizarre!

I think it might be that I tend to be frightfully organised when I have a lot to do. I schedule EVERYTHING into my calendar. For instance, “draft a blog post” used to come up on Sunday 9.30pm and if I was happy with the post, I’d schedule it to publish at some date in the future.

Now, I keep telling myself I have loads of time – surely I’ll blog more, write more but it hasn’t worked out that way. I once heard someone say, ‘If you want something done, give it to a busy person.’ How else can I explain doing NaNoWriMo 2011 (where I wrote over 50,000 words in 30 days) when I was neck deep in school work, office work and house work but this year, I just skived it.

Honestly, I think I needed a break. At first, I was bored senseless. Then over time, I began to enjoy the silence that generated from not doing anything. I felt an odd peace that meant I got comfortable loitering.

As great as this irresponsible loitering has been, I need to re-engage now. My left hand’s twitching. I start a new chapter of my life next year with a new job in January. It’s really exciting and I’m looking forward to throwing all my (now latent) passion at it. I can’t wait. I also plan to throw some love at this blog and get cracking with more frequent posting. I may get shot for failing on that promise but please remember that I always rise again – and I’ll always write, if not here then somewhere….in my notebook, or on a blank Word document or behind my napkin at dinner. Hopefully, it won’t come to that.

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NaNoWriMo2011 – Day 27

Title of novel: Let It Burn

Word count till date: 45,115

Bruno’s plans to propose to Julia get sidetracked by a hysterical Julia, after finding out that Joyce has left town and that Sandra and her family may be in danger.

NaNoWriMo2011 – Day 26

Title of novel: Let It Burn

Word count till date: 43,547

Julia finds out that Will is the witness to Paulie’s case. She had a dinner party with Bruno, Martha and Martha’s new beau, Ronan, who is ten years younger.

Joyce comes home to find her apartment ransacked. Some papers on the floor indicate what it might be in relation to. She leaves for Manchester immediately to stay with her mum.

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Only 4 days and 6,500 words to go!

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NaNoWriMo2011 – Day 24 & Day 25

Title of novel: Let It Burn

Word count till date: 41,085

Bruno gives an outstanding presentation that impresses Julia as well as other bosses at La Belle.

Joyce goes for her 20-week scan and has mixed feelings about being a single mother. Meanwhile, Julia is persuaded to contact her.

Marc Stuart (Paulie’s former boss at Skyline Financials) reveals himself and tries to track down Paulie, the witness and the so-called evidence that he believes may be used to blackmail him later. He has plans that everyone needs to be very worried about…

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